KAMILE's blogs

  1) Type up your teacher's feedback  in full . If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog. WWW: You have displayed some excellent editing and technical skills throughout this preliminary exercise. The song choice for this preliminary makes sense based and links to the brief.   Next steps: I know that you are planning to refilm this, but I am not quite sure it fits the conventions of music video as it feels more like a horror/thriller trailer. Consider how your music video will present an improvement to the quality of life in their community. Your statement of intent reflects this well but I do not feel your production demonstrates this enough 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write  two  WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and  two  Next Step bullet points for your preliminary exercise.  I had enjoyed filming the ...

 1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). www: Kamile, top effort here! Your unseen print advert analysis was very good! Next steps: A few gaps in knowledge in relation to CSP facts + figures - double check these from blog work. For Q7, more specific methods on how black widow was marketed + promoted.  (grade 6) 2) Look at the  mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify  three  points that you could have referred to in your answer. Upper case and bold – connotations of the important, powerful message of the image and copy. • The white text against a black background and the darkness of the image makes the writing stand out and anchor the message of the text about training being important. Athletic body connotes that the subject is in condition and well prepared for the ‘battle’. 3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use ...

  Item Progress Statement of Intent (Max. 300 Words)  ….                        Min. Two Filming Locations   …               A Clear Narrative/Story  ...                       Min. Two Characters (Including a Protagonist)  ...                        Variety of Camera Shots, Angles and Movements  ...                          Diegetic sound (which could include but is not restricted to dialogue, Foley sound and ambience /atmosphere).  ...                         Non-diegetic sound (which must include but is not restricted to music).  ...                    ...

The song that I have chosen is Karma by the creator of Or3o because it discusses about determination despite hardships and how people who try to bring you down will be fought down by their own consequences. giving the message that you should not waste your time with revenge but instead work on your dreams.. My video will involve a lot of scene shifts and symbolism with the use of clothing and actions in order to take advantage of camera angles to show and not tell the messages. My video will highlight the way to improve the community by sending the message that you should not waste your energy and time on people who bring you down, that you should focus on building up on your dream than ruin someone else's dream. I will use a low angled, wide shot that will show a successful person who had gone through hardships. This is because I want to show that they had over powered the people who tried bringing them down in order to represent to power change and a somewhat role reversal from t...

 Coursework preliminary exercise Coursework: Summer Project 2025 statement of Intent : Coursework Coursework Checklist Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response Preliminary exercise learner response Statement of Intent feedback + redraft

  1) Write a 100 word statement of intent explaining what you are going to make for your preliminary exercise. Statement of intent:  100 words explaining what you plan to make. Example statement of intent [147 words]:    I plan to make a 30-40 second video showing a girl trying to cheer up another girl in a gloomy environment due to how lonely society is now due to social media and the ongoing war today. the beginning of the video will have a girl randomly appear behind the sad girl to represent how a miracle can happen at any moment. the sad girl will have messy hair, sitting down and staring into the distance in an industrial place or a place with trash everywhere. I plan to use mise-en-scene to show how the sad girl feels lost and depressed visually rather than have her look like every other person.    In the middle of the video will have the camera shifting towards nature, symbolising how the escape from industrialisation is in reach and not far away, b...