Statement of Intent feedback + redraft
Link to brief: 3 Use of media terminology (language/representation/theory): 4 Comments for AQA: This statement of intent uses detailed media language throughout such as explicitly mentioning the types of camera shots, angles and costume and colour choices communicating meaning to an audience Clear emphasis and application of media theory e.g. Blumer and Katz in relation to audience appeal Next steps: Rephrase develop your representation section so that you consider the issues with ethnicity and bullying issues and stereotyping Be more explicit when you reference the brief outline remember that this music video production is about encouraging young people to take a small step in improving the quality of life in the community Very minor request but check your grammar (word order, punctuation) throughout your statement of intent Redraft: The song that I have chosen is 'Karma' by the creator of Or3o because the song sends a message that you should be resistant to people ...